Alas, I take from my dear creator what he took from me! Oh how ignorant he was to think that I was referring to him when I said “I shall be with you on your wedding night.” What misery would come to him if he was dead, none. No, the largest pain that could come to him was that, of what I myself have felt, the snatching away of a companion, in his case his beloved Elizabeth. It was almost uneffortless the killing of his wife. Frankenstein was too worried about his own life, that he let his wife, his dearest possession, out of his sight. This was my chance to strike! As she retreated to her room, I lingered behind, and when she was alone, I revealed myself. She let out a horrific and chilling scream at my sight. I in a second rushed to her and put my rough hands upon her smooth and beautiful neck, she was so fragile, it only took a twist of my wrist to hold her lifeless body in my arms. I settled her on the bed and hid behind the window, waiting for Frankenstein’s arrival. When we finally looked at each other, I could at last see in his eyes what I had been feeling since my body came to this wretched world, anguish and torment laid upon his soul.
-The Creature
The first thing I loved was how your first word was alas, it is one of those words you don't see most kids using. So great job with that and I loved the emotion and detail you put into this post, very nice.
ReplyDeleteUh oh! you have those writing skills in this post. I like all them words that are big and fancy. I never really hear them and to read them all at once is nice. They should write books using only words like those.
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